My day

江苏省常州市武进区横林实验小学 张恩祁

I have a happy day. Today is sunny.I get up at six o’clock.I have breakfast at six forty.I like egg pies and dumplings for breakfast.I go to school at seven in my mother’s car.There are some funny lessons today.I like PE lessons .Because I can play football at the PE leeson.It’s great fun.I have lunch at eleven.I like eggs for my lunch.I have three lessons in the afternoon. I go to bed at eight thirty.I have a sweet dream.Do you like my day?

指导老师：朱玉娟

文章标点正确，用词精准，表达清晰正确。作者通过描绘自己的一天来表达自己的开心，描写自己的一天生动详细，句式丰富比如：I like egg pies and dumplings for breakfast. I have a sweet dream.